TIME CAPSULE

The first item i choose is a wow game case. I choose this because it show what we had for entertianment back in these days. It also show's them what our imagination was like.
The second item i would have to choose is a xbox 360. It also shows what we had for entertainment.
The third item i would choos would be a cross to show what o0ur religion was back at this time.
The forth item would be a cd to show them what kind of music we had back at our time.
And the fith item would be a movie to show them what our taste in movies were.



Hello I am Dustin and i am from the year 2010 just leaving you's a letter to say hey. We speak mostly english at our time here in Blackville. I am usally playing games or hanging out with my friends. We got all kinds of stuff to do in out time like play video games and watch movies.

grammer test

Score Summary
(Click on question number to jump to question.) points earned points possible
Question 1 incorrect 0 1
Question 2 incorrect 0 1
Question 3 correct 1 1
Question 4 incorrect 0 1
Question 5 incorrect 0 1
Question 6 incorrect 0 1
Question 7 correct 1 1
Question 8 incorrect 0 1
Question 9 correct 1 1
Question 10 correct 1 1
Question 11 incorrect 0 1
Question 12 incorrect 0 1
Question 13 incorrect 0 1
Question 14 incorrect 0 1
Question 15 incorrect 0 1
Score: (27%) 4 15

5 BEST AND 5 WORST BANDS

I'm going to start with naming my 5 favorite band starting with number 5. These bands will be graded on there talents such as vocals, screams, rifts, drums , solo's and heavyness



#5 Goes to Kill switch Engage. This band gets number 5 cause of there sick instrument and Howard Jones Amazing vocals.

#4 Goes to As I Lay Dying. This band deserves number 4 because of Jordan Mancino amazing drum skills and Tim Lambisis awesome screams.

#3 Goes to Norma Jean. This band gets placed in number 3 because of there ability to make anything sound hardcore.

#2 Goes to Haste the Day. This band gets there place at number 2 by having amazing rifts and great lyrics and meanings.

And #1 goes to ... The Devil Wears Prada. The Devil Wears Prada gets number one because they got amazing lyrics, great instrumental, great clean vocals and amazing screaming.

grammer

1- The team won (its) (it's) game. Did you win (yours)
it's,yours,to
2- They left (their) (there) books (there) (their)(they're).
Their, There
3- I hear (your) (you're) about to graduate.
your
4- (Its) (It's) nice that (there) (their) (they're)friendly.
It's, They're
5- Although I get (alot) (a lot) of colds, I feel(all right)(alright)now.
a lot, alright
6- (Whose) (Who's) prettier (then) (than) you?
who's, than
7- Are you tired? I'm out of (breathe) (breath),(too) (to) (two).
breath, too
8- Run back and (fourth) (forth) from (hear) (here) to(their) (there).
forth, here, there
9- (Your) (You're) about to (loose) (lose) (your)(you're) book.
you're, lose, your
10- Everyone will (accept) (except) the prize (accept)(except) you.
accept, except
11- Do you know (weather) (whether) or not he will giveme the prize.
whether
12- Many people (choose) (chose) to live in large cities.
choose
13- Is the doctor (through) (thorough) (threw) with myexam?
through
14- What (affect) (effect) does the school (principle)(principal) have on you?
effect, principal
15- What did he (advice) (advise) you to do? Did you takehis (advice)(advise)?
advise, advice
16- (There) (Their) (They're) are (alot) (a lot) of (your)you're) friends in the boat.
there, a lot, your
17- I will (buy) (by) a book (buy) (by) Ray Bradbury.
buy, by

"Within Destruction"

To the producer of the show "Within Destruction" i have a new character pitch to hand on to you. A villain that is cold hearted and disruptive with a mind of "destruction". His name...Delastery. He has hair that stands up in a flame of hellfire. He is a powerful mage that cast destruction to anyone below him with his powers. He has only one thing on his mind and that is to destroy Arthas the man that destroyed his village trying (and seceding) to kill his evil father. Delastery never cared for his father but his morther and sister where killed in the battle along with every one in the village except Delastery who warded off Arthas with his powers.

BRUTALITY

Once upon a time there was a 93 year old women was covered in blood and sweat from a viscous fight...she one. She was standing in a col ledge library waiting...just waiting for them to come for her. A death has occur ed and she knew the popo would be there soon she just knew it they would be coming to get her. she cant dodge this she has killed AHHHNOLD. "What have i done". She said. I cant believe i kill AHHHNOLD.
She heard the sirens and took off in a sprint but the cops hased her she was just so fast that they couldn't catch her. Then she say a gun shop and ran in there and grabbed herself a BFG from doom 3 and then the cops put on the mega phone and say come on out now and we wont kill you. "I am not going back to jail again" She jumps out and and open fires clearing the area of all the cops once they were all clear she goes back in the store for more guns but that when she seen him. AHHNOLD was still alive and he was pi...angry he grabed his pump acxtion shotgun and filled her full of lead.

www.hookedgamers.com/nds/pokemon_ranger_shadows_of_almia/review/article-302 i think that is is an excellent game review for kids because it explains it very well.

writing inventory

No i usually don't write during my spare time because i usually don't have time. During my spare time I'm usually playing games or at friends house. My favorite writer is Gary Pualson i like him because he wrote my favorite book which is brains winter(the sequel to hatchet). I like his style of writing because most of it takes place in the woods and has to do with hunting and adventure. I find that when i am given a chance to write about fictional stuff such as stuff that would happen in games i usually get the best out of it.

I find descriptive writing is challenging for me because i have a hard time thinking of what to write. Most of the ideas i get from writing is from games and Cd's i play or listen to but i also take alot of events that happened in my life to add to the story. No i don't have a current writing project that I'm working on because i usually only write when i am asked to buy my teachers.

No there isn't really a piece of writing that i have done that i am proud of. When i am asked to write a story i usually prepair 2 drafts. I think that my strengths as a writer is my imagination i am able to think up good ideas fast. My weaknesses as a writer are for one my messy writing and i am usually in a rush to get it done.

My favorite subject for writing is probably fantasy and adventure. My goals as a writer for this semester is to get at least one or two good storeys written.

writing inventory

BLACKVILLE TALON (DuSTIn)

Dustin

Febuary 9 2010

DEAR TALON

I would like to write for use in the entertainment section. If i had this position i would write articles about the latest game reviews and and movie reviews. I would also like to write about cds and music that is coming out or is already out.

I would very much apriciat this job

YOURS TRULY

DUSTIN KEENAN

METAL MONKEY TAKES A TUMBLE

DISCRIPTIVE WRITING
I sat back with my laptop on my desk and then all of a sudden a pop up pops up. It says very funny video and has a picture of a monkey with a nose as red as a apple and a hat as black as tar. He held a red Jackson guitar. I decided to watch the video he was just standing there then all of a sudden he started jamming real hardcore on the guitar to a war of age’s song. About 4 minutes later he was about to finish the song then he took a tumble over the patch cord on the guitar and fell. The impact was so devastating that you could have heard his skull smash from a mile away blood was pouring out every where. He fell on the guitar and completely demolished it and the whammy bar drove into his stomach. I thought to myself this isn’t funny at all this is quite disturbing. Then all of a sudden on the screen popped up ha-ha I got you this video is fake I was then so relived that I jumped with joy, with so much joy I woke every one in the house up.