Writing class = awsome.

Through out this semester i have been in writing class which gave me the chance to create this blog along with some great videos for school. I enjoyed this very much it was probably my favorite class all year cause i got to write about a lot of awesome stuff like bands and games that I play.

The most challenging writing we did in this course i would have to say was when Mr Carter gave us a picture and we had to write about this picture and and this little boys trip from one spot to another i found this one a bit difficult because it didn't allow me to create the trip up entirely by myself i think i would have been able to do a better job with out the picture. I found that the easiest type of writing that we did was when we had to write a Christmas story.

The blog entry that i am most pleased with is my latest one on Parkway Drive I enjoyed doing this one very much because i got to explore the aspects of this amazing band and put them into words.http://blackvillewriting77.blogspot.com/2010/05/why-wow-is-beetter-than-runescape.html

A writing piece that i wish i could do over would have to be my how to piece because i think i could have done a better job on it http://blackvillewriting77.blogspot.com/2010/05/how-to-do-how-to-project.html

I found the peer assignments very helpful because they gave me a chance to go back and make my corrections and get a better mark on the unit.

I feel like i have full filled my writing inventory cause i did get a few good pieces of writing out of this semester.

Three of the most enjoyable assignments I did this year would have to be my parkway drive is the best band ever, An Ahhhny Christmas and mine Jr Alex and Travis video called The Evolution of Frankando.

The three assignments that i did not like would have to be the how to video project the telling a story assignment and the grammer project we did.

Parkway Drive best band ever?

With the there new upcoming album coming up which is set to be released the 29 of June i decided to focus this topic on possible the best metal band ever in my eyes. Parkway are a Metal core band from Byron Bay, Australia the band consist of Winston McCall, (vocals) Ben Gorden, (drums) Jeff ling, (Lead guitar) Jia O'Connor, (bass) and Luke Kilpatrick (Rhythm guitar). I am going to be focusing on just how this band might be the greatest metal core band of our day's.

In my mind Parkway are a contender for greatest metal core band of our time because of there raw talent and passion for music. Parkways passion for music is show just by how hard they worked to put there name out there in the world unlike and Disney or pop band that is out there today parkway didn't have any body to commercialize them they didn't have they're parents pay money to put them on TV and get know they made a CD and they toured constantly for 3 years. in 3 years they toured all of Australia then they had no where also to tour so they called a man named Adam Dutkiewicz or other wise know as Adam D lead guitarist for Killswitch Engage and producer for many metal bands and they recorded a full length album in 2 weeks and then headed overseas to England and tour all across England and then got a flight to America and toured all across the U.S. After they toured across the us they got a offer from a record company called Epitaph records and they signed to them and got there album killing with a smile released in America. As you can see Parkway have worked hard and traveled far from home just to play there music to there fans. Which proves my point that they are passionate about there music.

Parkway also have the talent for being the greatest metal core band of our time. With people like Jeff on lead guitar who is extremely technical and and Luke on rhythm who doesn't play quite as technical as Jeff equals out to an amazing combination. With Ben Gorden on drums is also a great asset to the band cause he is a very fast drum player even though he does not have the greatest double bass talent he is amazingly fast at the beats. Jia who is on bass does very well on even though parkways bass is not that noticeable on there records Jia puts on a great performance at concerts. And to top off there amazing talent they got Winston on vocals who is an amazing screamer and great performer. With all these talents put together the band's songs are just amazing i can not think of one Parkway song that does not have a awesome breakdown plus Parkway drive are the masters of sing along songs!

Parkway are also great because of there teamwork and there friendship. Every member of parkway have know each other since they were kids and they grew up with each other hanging out and surfing with each other and they have a great friendship and it really helps them out when they are playing up on stage doing great performances.

Despite all these great facts about Parkway there is a part of me that says there are a lot of metal core bands out there and to judge with out hearing them all is just crazy. I mean i love parkway drive but then there are bands that i like almost just as much or just as much such as As I Lay Dying or For Today or August Burns Red which are all amazing bands that i can not decide which is greater because they are all strong in different ways.

In my conclusion I cannot decide if Parkway is the greatest Metal core band ever because there are so many bands out there that it is difficult to choose i guesse to choose would be like "all hell breaking loose".

Persuasive writing is cool allwrite...yes i know i spelled right wrong.

http://www.teenink.com/opinion/current_events_politics/article/137473/Who-Believes-Pres-Obama-Is-Full-Of-Junk/

The title of the article i have chosen is do you think President Obama is full of junk. I found this on Teenink.com. Author of this article goes by the name of Jocogirl. This piece of persuasive writing starts out good by telling us what she is thinking an bout the topic that she has chosen to write about. The main point of this piece of writing is she is trying to see who agrees with her that Obama is "Full of junk".

The opening paragraph caught my attention cause i do agree that Obama is full of crap. This article only has one paragraph. But this one paragraph is quite well kept in the same category the entire time. She could have used more information to back up that she thinks that he is a liar. SO as i seen the title of this article i had to read it because i completely agree with her that Obama is full of crap. The ending to this article was very power full and was great writing.

How to do Ony

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=XCMDwx5B6Vk&feature=related


This is a good video and helpfull to many people except he could have did a better job explaining that range have to stay on ony entire time untill the adds come and then they aoe. How ever in the video he does show images of the aoe on the adds and he also doesnt mention that you have to stay out of her deep breath move.

Azeroth

I went to sleep then all of a suden i woke up in the mystical world of azeroth i see wow players every where im my level 80 human mage running around blasting stuff and turning people into sheep. I am everything but powerless. I cause chaos upon my enimies i destroy them without pity. I rule my kingdom with pride and power I...I....I woke up.

Super amazing awsome land

I am on a vaction to a place that is called super amazing awsome land. On this vacation there is only me there because im the only one awsome enough to go there every one else is not quite as awsome as me. Here there are unlimted amount of stuff to do such as seeing concerts swiming and all the other awsome stuff. I see a car and gigantic mushroom towers but when i look over into the woods i see a monster jump out and go boo!!! It would have scared me but im to awsome for that.

hot to make a drano bomb

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=3ZL4h3iBJkM&feature=related

How to do a how to project

Well when doing a how to project the first thing you got to do is think of a project to do it on. Second you must come up with idea's to write this how do project it is never a bad thing to have lots of explanation. The third thing you need to do is grab a Piece of paper and a pen or if you are like me you can type it up on blog for school. You should be careful when creating your how to topic you should never do it on anything offensive to people or they may be angry and rip your face off. Make sure you always do a spell check when you are finished if not then your teacher just may knee you in the face.

Evolution Of Frankando

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Telling a story

At first i left home in a hurry then i got kidnapped by some guys with paint on there faces and feathers on there heads they fed me eyeballs. Then i got hit by a car and flew over the roof and they took me t my neighbors house. Then i ran threw the woods looking for bunnies but then one bit me and then i ran here.

Gears of War 2 review

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=gUTlSUugBO0


I found this review alright but there are a sew mistakes that he did make while doing this review such as when he says you can use a pistol to take down enemy's he is showing himself killing an enemy with a sniper rifle and not a handgun. He also made a mistake when he said u can sue motors to kill enemy's when he was really using a torchbow. Overall i think this is good review because he explains about the multi player and all the different mode's of Gears of War 2. He also explained the campaign mode very well also by telling us that we the Delta squad took the fight to the Lotus.

I think this could be used in the schools online newspaper because it would be a great visual reference to the game Gears of War 2.

Telling the storey

Finding Forester review

Finding Forester is a movie about a teen aged African American living in the broncs who is secretly smart at writing and has a natural talent for basket ball. No one knows he is good at writing because his marks remain at a C average but when his writing teacher get his test marks they are remarkable and tells his mother. Then the boy who's name is Jamal(Rob Brown) gets an opportunity to go to a different school for better education and he takes it.



Sean Connery who plays William Forrester in the film is a famous writer of a book and is considered a literature genius but thought that when he wrote the book people where saying what they thought he was trying to say with it and he did not like this. So he locked himself up in his house for years writing and watching the outdoors threw his front window. When Jamal breaks into Williams house for a dare that him and his friends have he gets caught and forgets his books there and will reads and corrects the books and then the two of them meet the next day when Jamal realizes that he read threw them.





What I would consider the theme of this movie is family and friendship because William didn't have any friends for a long time but when he meets Jamal he seems that Will becomes happy compared to before and Will soon realizes just how important that friendship really is. I think that the theme of this movie is provided very clear fully threw the story and i agree with it completely.




One of the small conflicts of the film is between Jamal and one of the other kids on his basketball team because the other kid thinks he is better than Jamal at basket ball when they are actually about the same.

HOSPITAL VISiT DAWG(BONUS)

I enjoyed our visit to the hospital the tour was really great my favorite part would have to be getting shocks buy the shock thing they showed us. It was really tiring tho so when i got home i went stright to sleep.

District 9

http://projectionbooth.blogspot.com/2010/03/best-picture-nom-round-up.html#district9

I choosed this review because I loved this movie i found it was one of the most amazing movies i have seen right under Ninja Assasin and Avatar. In this review he explains how Neil Blomkamp had very minimal resoures while making this movie and yet he still made it amazingly awsome. There is but one thing that i disagree about in this review tho and that is that he seems to be hating James Camron and Avatar. He says that District 9 pretty much destroyed Avatar but I would say not. Dont get me wrong distric 9 is one of my favorite movies but it does not destroy Avatar.

District 9 is a Sci-Fi movie and i think that anyone who enjoys a good action/alein movie or anyother movie really would enjoy this movie because it has a great plot. Unless your a twlight fan then you can just stop reading this.

Activities from allpoetry.com (bonus)

#1.Impending Doom is an amazing christian death metal band i listen to and they are amazingly awsome. I cant wait to see them in concert this summer at soulfest if they go. The are a realy good band with sick breakdowns and some realy amazing rifts. The band hails from california. The band consist of 3 members Brook Reeves on vocals, Corey Johnson guitar and David Sittig on bass.

#2.One day I was sitting in my room playing World of Warcraft and listening to music when i thought what if i could actualy do what my character in WoW could do. That would be so awsome and fun. It would be awsome because Iwould be able to do prety much any thing I want i would be able to fly and jump off anything without worrying abut dying because if i died in the game i would just be able to fly back to my dead body and revive myself.

#3.I am the bones you could'nt break
You are the stone that breaks my back
You are the salt that burns my wounds
I am the one that makes the next move
In the end we are both the ones that have been bruised


#4
Song-Descending into hell
artis- Sleeping Giant


First im gonna start off with telling you what this song is about. This song is about how there are slaves all around the world and there are inncent people in jail and how people are beaten for no reason but we can all change this by fighting back. It talks about how everyone has to fight there own personal hell some time and one of the lines in it are Even jesus him self has walk into hell and everytime i hear this line im like this is such an awsome song

A Ahhny Christmas

One long and tiring Christmas eve Ahhny was siting in his rocking chair watching over the city of candycornia. As he was looking down at his chain of gyms called 5 hour fitness plus one extra hour of working out he realized some one forgot to lock the door to one of the gyms so he got to the CHOPPER!!! and flew on down there. As he was locking the door he seen one of his very many arch enemy's trying to break into his gym so he ran over and drop kicked him in the face then screamed SCREW YOU, "SCREW YOU BENNY"!!! and smashed him threw a car door and set a brink on the gas pedal so it dove and crashed into Benny's own house.

Ahhny jumped in his chop pa to only realize that he had left the engine running and was now out of gas. So he started running then found out that he forgot to put clothes on before he left the house. He then ran into a guy with a motorcycle and said " I need your clothes, your boots, and your motorcycle". And the guy was so scared he gave Ahhny every thing he asked for.

Ahhny Finally made it all the way home. When he got home he was so tired that he decide to go to sleep. But then in the middle of the night out of now where Ahhny heard the noise. He recognized this noise as if it was a bomb going of in a war he knew what was happening right now and he wasn't going to allow it. He heard someone opening his cookie jar. He then jumped out of bed like a ninja and grabbed a line of grenades a rocket launcher a shot gun and a combat knife and headed to the kitchen. He sneaked around the corners like a cat and climbed up the stairs like a ghost. He finally gt to the kitchen and peeked around the corner of the door to see His Worst night mare Santa and all his elves were standing around eating Ahhny's cookies He could not allow this to happen.

Ahhny kicked down the door tossed a grenade and yelled "WHO TOLD YOU, YOU COULD EAT MY COOKIES". He then killed all the elves with his shot gun and there he was facing Old Saint Nick himself ready to fight. Santa whipped out a candy cane blade and said "Bring it old man". Ahhny didn't take this very well. Ahhny kicked Santa in he gut then stabbed him multiple times in the stomach but this did not effect Santa because he was packing a 6 pack under that gut. So Ahhny then put his knife down and instead speared Santa into the glass wall off the roof and into Ahhnys choppers per pullers. Santa smashed his head off the propellers and went unconscious. Ahhny thought Santa was dead...but he wasn't Du Du DA.

Delastery

If i could trade places with any one from fiction I would choose my level 80 Mage character in World of War craft. I would choose this character because i think it would be very fun to Be a character in W.O.W because you can never die. It would be awesome because I would be extremely powerful and I could fly my Griffin which would be very cool.

It would also be awesome because I could teleport to places which would be extremely easy compared to walking or driving. If i was delastery i could help the world in the evils that have consumed it.

Becoming The ARCHTYPE

There is a archetype in the new music genre of christian metal/death core music and they are know as BECOMING THE ARCH TYPE!!!!!!.

Becoming the arch type are a Christan metal/death core band formed in 1999. Formed in Dracula Georgia. They have released three albums on solid state records and there new album dichotomy sole over 2300 copies in the us in the first week it was number 18 on the top new artist list. They laid down the future of pianos in Christan death metal.

This Arch type are an amazing band with unbelievable potential. They have created many rifts and songs that will surely be model after in the future by other awsome bands.

MY HOPES

Here is to you on your specail day
I hope This Cheers you up for your entire day
But knowing you ,you ignorant brick you wont even read this blob of spit
But if you do then i hope your happy on this wonderfull birthday.

WOW

Here's poem on wow


Wow
Play
Watch
LIVE
Eat
RAID With US

ME

There once was aladcalled Dustin the dk man
He had brown hair blue eye white skin and toes
The son of a mother named sherry
He loves to play Wow he loves to play xbox but most of all he loves music
Hes fears are only having a fear
But He wants to see more bands and the rest of the world
resident of black ville in the year 2010.

***Sickest car ever***

I think my ultimate way of travel would have to be a car. But not just any car a car that could fly so it would be like a super flying car but not only could it fly but it could also float on water so it would be a super flying boat car. It would have speakers the size of truck tires and a huge double bass.

***Do to Fatal instincts your plane is heading directly toward that ground right there and you just may die***

If i was stranded on a island myself with one wish to bring some one over here with me i would have to say it would be Goku. I would summon Goku here with me because once he was here we could just instant transmission on out of this island and go home.

***Twilight Vanqisher***

I think Twilight is possible the worst piece of writing i have ever heard about and ever single copy of it should be burned then spit on to put the fire out. This series of novels has taken the awsomest of a vampire and complete demolished it. After all the work Stoker went threw to make vampires cool they demolished it with a single novel. I think the author of this disrespectful novel should endure a life of pain and suffering for writing this.

Hapyness prevails

The best day in my life was June 22 the second day of soul fest. This day was amazing ill start off with explaining what soul fest is, soul fest is a giant concert held in new Hampshire with a bunch of awesome metal bands. This day was so amazing cause i got so see alot of my favorite bands like As I Lay Dying, Norma Jean, For Today, and lots more. Me, Braden, Ryan, Joey, and Brad all walked to walmart and there i bought a couple of Cd's. The best thing that happened to me this week is when i went up to a friends House and just chilled and play Wow all the day.

the pig that got pwnd

Once upon a time, there were three little pigs. There was Curly. He was the oldest.
There was Wurly. He was the smartest. And then there was Flo. She was the favorite pig.
Their mother loved Flo the best. Curly, Wurly and Flo lived with their mother in a high-rise
apartment building in New York City. Their apartment was on the 75th floor.
The pigs didn’t mind this because there was an elevator that opened right in front of their
apartment door. It was on the days that their elevator wasn’t working, that the pigs suffered.
Their little hoofs would be aching by the time they reached their apartment.
Their mother would have to have little hoof baths waiting for her three little
pigs when they finally reached the top. Of course, Flo always got the warmest hoof bath
because she was there mother’s favorite. One day, Mama Pig sent the three pigs to the store
to buy apples for there dinner. She gave them a list of items that she needed.
She also gave them their allowance, and she told them that they could buy there favorite
candy which they would eat for there dessert. The three pigs put on their jackets (it was winter).
They put on their gloves and scarves. Next, it was time to put on their boots.
Curly slipped on his bright red leather boots over his red and yellow polka dot socks.
Wurly, being the most intelligent, slipped on his waterproof, fully lined boots over his white socks.
Curly and Wurly were ready and waiting for their sister. She could not find her boots.
"Curly and Wurly," she said, "have you seen my boots?"
Curly and Wurly looked at each other and then they looked at there sister.
"I’ll tell you where they are," said Wurly, "if you’ll give us your allowance to hold while you go
and get them."
"Okay," agreed Flo as she handed the boys her allowance.
"Their are your boots, over there," said Curly. "Where?" asked Flo suspiciously.
"Over there!" squealed the boys as they pointed to the window in there living room.
"There over there behind that curtain." Flo slowly walked toward the window.
They boys followed closely behind there sister. Just as she reached the window, Curly opened the
window and Wurly pushed Flo through. Curly and Wurly squealed with delight as there sister fell 75 floors. Curly and Wurly were thrilled that there plan worked. They were rid of Flo and they had her money! Luckily for Flo, she landed on a huge snow pile and was not hurt. Her brothers were not so fortunate. Mama Pig heard the commotion, ran into the living room and, when she realized what they had done, sent the boys to live with there Uncle Oscar Mayer.
Uncle Oscar always knew what to do with bad little pigs. The boys protested. They were just doing Flo a favor by helping her find her boots; it wasn’t they’re fault that she was clumsy.
But Mama would not listen to their excuses and off they went to Uncle Oscar’s. Flo and Mama Pig still live on the 75th floor of the apartment building in New York City, and they're very happy there. Now Flo gets her brothers’ allowance since they're not there.

how i picture hell

When i think of hell I think of 2 places, place number one is a place of physical torture for people who have chosen a path of evil or disbelieve. Path number two is a place of mental torture where you are in nothing but a black space with nobody but your self trapped with boredom with nothing but blackness and loneliness. Nothing but your memories of your past life.

TIME CAPSULE

The first item i choose is a wow game case. I choose this because it show what we had for entertianment back in these days. It also show's them what our imagination was like.
The second item i would have to choose is a xbox 360. It also shows what we had for entertainment.
The third item i would choos would be a cross to show what o0ur religion was back at this time.
The forth item would be a cd to show them what kind of music we had back at our time.
And the fith item would be a movie to show them what our taste in movies were.



Hello I am Dustin and i am from the year 2010 just leaving you's a letter to say hey. We speak mostly english at our time here in Blackville. I am usally playing games or hanging out with my friends. We got all kinds of stuff to do in out time like play video games and watch movies.

grammer test

Score Summary
(Click on question number to jump to question.) points earned points possible
Question 1 incorrect 0 1
Question 2 incorrect 0 1
Question 3 correct 1 1
Question 4 incorrect 0 1
Question 5 incorrect 0 1
Question 6 incorrect 0 1
Question 7 correct 1 1
Question 8 incorrect 0 1
Question 9 correct 1 1
Question 10 correct 1 1
Question 11 incorrect 0 1
Question 12 incorrect 0 1
Question 13 incorrect 0 1
Question 14 incorrect 0 1
Question 15 incorrect 0 1
Score: (27%) 4 15

5 BEST AND 5 WORST BANDS

I'm going to start with naming my 5 favorite band starting with number 5. These bands will be graded on there talents such as vocals, screams, rifts, drums , solo's and heavyness



#5 Goes to Kill switch Engage. This band gets number 5 cause of there sick instrument and Howard Jones Amazing vocals.

#4 Goes to As I Lay Dying. This band deserves number 4 because of Jordan Mancino amazing drum skills and Tim Lambisis awesome screams.

#3 Goes to Norma Jean. This band gets placed in number 3 because of there ability to make anything sound hardcore.

#2 Goes to Haste the Day. This band gets there place at number 2 by having amazing rifts and great lyrics and meanings.

And #1 goes to ... The Devil Wears Prada. The Devil Wears Prada gets number one because they got amazing lyrics, great instrumental, great clean vocals and amazing screaming.

grammer

1- The team won (its) (it's) game. Did you win (yours)
it's,yours,to
2- They left (their) (there) books (there) (their)(they're).
Their, There
3- I hear (your) (you're) about to graduate.
your
4- (Its) (It's) nice that (there) (their) (they're)friendly.
It's, They're
5- Although I get (alot) (a lot) of colds, I feel(all right)(alright)now.
a lot, alright
6- (Whose) (Who's) prettier (then) (than) you?
who's, than
7- Are you tired? I'm out of (breathe) (breath),(too) (to) (two).
breath, too
8- Run back and (fourth) (forth) from (hear) (here) to(their) (there).
forth, here, there
9- (Your) (You're) about to (loose) (lose) (your)(you're) book.
you're, lose, your
10- Everyone will (accept) (except) the prize (accept)(except) you.
accept, except
11- Do you know (weather) (whether) or not he will giveme the prize.
whether
12- Many people (choose) (chose) to live in large cities.
choose
13- Is the doctor (through) (thorough) (threw) with myexam?
through
14- What (affect) (effect) does the school (principle)(principal) have on you?
effect, principal
15- What did he (advice) (advise) you to do? Did you takehis (advice)(advise)?
advise, advice
16- (There) (Their) (They're) are (alot) (a lot) of (your)you're) friends in the boat.
there, a lot, your
17- I will (buy) (by) a book (buy) (by) Ray Bradbury.
buy, by

"Within Destruction"

To the producer of the show "Within Destruction" i have a new character pitch to hand on to you. A villain that is cold hearted and disruptive with a mind of "destruction". His name...Delastery. He has hair that stands up in a flame of hellfire. He is a powerful mage that cast destruction to anyone below him with his powers. He has only one thing on his mind and that is to destroy Arthas the man that destroyed his village trying (and seceding) to kill his evil father. Delastery never cared for his father but his morther and sister where killed in the battle along with every one in the village except Delastery who warded off Arthas with his powers.

BRUTALITY

Once upon a time there was a 93 year old women was covered in blood and sweat from a viscous fight...she one. She was standing in a col ledge library waiting...just waiting for them to come for her. A death has occur ed and she knew the popo would be there soon she just knew it they would be coming to get her. she cant dodge this she has killed AHHHNOLD. "What have i done". She said. I cant believe i kill AHHHNOLD.
She heard the sirens and took off in a sprint but the cops hased her she was just so fast that they couldn't catch her. Then she say a gun shop and ran in there and grabbed herself a BFG from doom 3 and then the cops put on the mega phone and say come on out now and we wont kill you. "I am not going back to jail again" She jumps out and and open fires clearing the area of all the cops once they were all clear she goes back in the store for more guns but that when she seen him. AHHNOLD was still alive and he was pi...angry he grabed his pump acxtion shotgun and filled her full of lead.

www.hookedgamers.com/nds/pokemon_ranger_shadows_of_almia/review/article-302 i think that is is an excellent game review for kids because it explains it very well.

writing inventory

No i usually don't write during my spare time because i usually don't have time. During my spare time I'm usually playing games or at friends house. My favorite writer is Gary Pualson i like him because he wrote my favorite book which is brains winter(the sequel to hatchet). I like his style of writing because most of it takes place in the woods and has to do with hunting and adventure. I find that when i am given a chance to write about fictional stuff such as stuff that would happen in games i usually get the best out of it.

I find descriptive writing is challenging for me because i have a hard time thinking of what to write. Most of the ideas i get from writing is from games and Cd's i play or listen to but i also take alot of events that happened in my life to add to the story. No i don't have a current writing project that I'm working on because i usually only write when i am asked to buy my teachers.

No there isn't really a piece of writing that i have done that i am proud of. When i am asked to write a story i usually prepair 2 drafts. I think that my strengths as a writer is my imagination i am able to think up good ideas fast. My weaknesses as a writer are for one my messy writing and i am usually in a rush to get it done.

My favorite subject for writing is probably fantasy and adventure. My goals as a writer for this semester is to get at least one or two good storeys written.

writing inventory

BLACKVILLE TALON (DuSTIn)

Dustin

Febuary 9 2010

DEAR TALON

I would like to write for use in the entertainment section. If i had this position i would write articles about the latest game reviews and and movie reviews. I would also like to write about cds and music that is coming out or is already out.

I would very much apriciat this job

YOURS TRULY

DUSTIN KEENAN

METAL MONKEY TAKES A TUMBLE

DISCRIPTIVE WRITING
I sat back with my laptop on my desk and then all of a sudden a pop up pops up. It says very funny video and has a picture of a monkey with a nose as red as a apple and a hat as black as tar. He held a red Jackson guitar. I decided to watch the video he was just standing there then all of a sudden he started jamming real hardcore on the guitar to a war of age’s song. About 4 minutes later he was about to finish the song then he took a tumble over the patch cord on the guitar and fell. The impact was so devastating that you could have heard his skull smash from a mile away blood was pouring out every where. He fell on the guitar and completely demolished it and the whammy bar drove into his stomach. I thought to myself this isn’t funny at all this is quite disturbing. Then all of a sudden on the screen popped up ha-ha I got you this video is fake I was then so relived that I jumped with joy, with so much joy I woke every one in the house up.