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seth kimbrough

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Wednesday, May 26, 2010

Persuasive writing is cool allwrite...yes i know i spelled right wrong.

http://www.teenink.com/opinion/current_events_politics/article/137473/Who-Believes-Pres-Obama-Is-Full-Of-Junk/

The title of the article i have chosen is do you think President Obama is full of junk. I found this on Teenink.com. Author of this article goes by the name of Jocogirl. This piece of persuasive writing starts out good by telling us what she is thinking an bout the topic that she has chosen to write about. The main point of this piece of writing is she is trying to see who agrees with her that Obama is "Full of junk".

The opening paragraph caught my attention cause i do agree that Obama is full of crap. This article only has one paragraph. But this one paragraph is quite well kept in the same category the entire time. She could have used more information to back up that she thinks that he is a liar. SO as i seen the title of this article i had to read it because i completely agree with her that Obama is full of crap. The ending to this article was very power full and was great writing.

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